thank you sweete =)
i was going for the idea again that what is a simple thing to one is an amazing thing to another, in this case the teddy bear.
i'm sorry to hear that babe and hope now you've overcome the demons of your parst :)
this may be mine but it still brings a tear to my eye, i was crying hard the first time i read it aloud.

I'm hoping to one day publish a full book of poetry and some of my short stories into a big book but not just yet. i'd rather see my kids grow up first and collect loads of writing so i have more to show when i do decide.
supposedly one of mine "shadows in the alley" is being published in a book in America in a few month but i'll believe it when i see it lol.

hehe yes that's it =D
I used a dove deliberatly to speak of something inoccent, white and pure falling in front of your feet so to speak, you know shock factor lol. I really hope Armageddon is like that lol, we're all gonna burn in hell anyway so might as well have a jolly good time in the process ;)

hehe thanks sweetie.
i dunno what i was aiming for with this but i guess to give everyone summit to think about!?!

i've had so many drink and drug problems i've lost count lol. writing really did help me express what i was feeling even if i didn't realise it. it's good that i can look at my past and laugh at how foolish i was, i still drink and *coughocassionallytaketheodddrugcough*but i'm strong enough not to want that kind of life again :) i like what i've got and i love where i'm going but it's good to re-read my work and see something good came out of it :)

smileforasmile said:

I love the last stanza!!!!!!!!

thank you :D

a nice oldie....i wrote this roughly in 2000 while i was having a little trouble with naughty naughty drugs

hehe XD...i love writing stuff like this cause it's great fun and i really do laugh out loud to myself sometimes...i'll have to post some of my short horror stories on here, give you all a good laugh at hells expense lol

hehe yeah unfortunatly i was blessed with an over active imagination so even if i'm not really feeling a certain emotion i can imagine what it feels like!?! lol if i ever do feel like that then god help us all ;)

hehe thanks...i wrote this at the weekend after watching loads of old horror movies :)

hehe thanks.
no i've thankfully never been hurt but many have tried and failed lol. maybe at the time it hurt but i'm a strong person and get over things very quickly :)

BRAVO my dear! This is really good. Almost made me cry. The last stanza really sticks out. It's so familiar to some of the feelings I have. Great job! :)

thanks sweetie...i wrote this for my granny who passed away xxx

smileforasmile said:

I love it! It is beautiful! My favorite line was when you said: "Your footprints in the snow are the smiles in my dreams"

hehe thanks sweetie *blushes*...the whole poem was constructed around that line...it means something very special to me and i hope it shows :D